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Post by Lianne Issa on Apr 19, 2007 19:38:18 GMT
I started writing a novel quite a few years ago and have gotten to about 10 chapters but things always get in the way, everytime i have a break i have to read the whole thing again!! it's one of those things i'll have finished when i'm too old to enjoy reading anymore anyways, i'm kinda shy about it, no one i know has ever read it (kathryn read a page a while back but only one of my fave bits!) so be kind www.lianneissa.com/page10.htm
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klpdesigns
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'Twinkly Princess'
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Post by klpdesigns on Apr 19, 2007 22:26:35 GMT
At last I get to read some more of your brilliant work - I loved the page I read previously - you doubt yourself to much - you are really creative - believe it, we all do. I hope that this book in saved in triplicate and stored on a high shelf so Buck can't get to it!!! :-)
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Post by Lianne Issa on Apr 20, 2007 12:10:12 GMT
thanks Kathryn i don't think it will ever be punlishable but it is great fun to write, one day i will continue
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Post by rachel on Apr 20, 2007 14:59:58 GMT
Lovely Novel Lianne, can't wait for more work Rachel x
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Post by sinzi on Apr 20, 2007 18:26:23 GMT
Lianne how many other talents do you have that we don't know about? Writting was always my weakest point. I was never able to put my thoughts on a piece of paper but I can't say the same about you. The novel starts lovely. And I really like your way of writing, like the way you present the story and the words you use. It's really enjoyable. Hope you'll post more of it
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Post by Lianne Issa on Apr 21, 2007 9:36:58 GMT
thanks so much Sinz i'm really glad you like it. every time i read it i think certain sentences need changing and some parts are a bit overdramatic, its difficult to get a balance
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Post by sinzi on Apr 21, 2007 17:12:39 GMT
I'm not a native english speaker. For me they sound really great. I wouldn't be able to write a novel in Romanian...I don't even thing how would that sound in English
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Post by ktalbot on Apr 22, 2007 21:04:08 GMT
You write really well Lianne, I haven't had a chance to sit down and read through it properly yet, but I skim read the main parts of it and seems very well written
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Post by Lianne Issa on Apr 23, 2007 17:19:48 GMT
thanks Keith
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