|
Post by rachel on Apr 20, 2007 15:24:02 GMT
Hiya, This is a poem I wrote in a club called Inklings and finished at home, started the 2nd part of it so I'll post it here aswell.
Waiting here, alone in the lounge reading a book, waiting while sitting on the sofa for a knock on the door. When I see who it is, I'm waiting for memories to rush through my head into something like a photo album. I open the doos and come to find a long lost relative. But who?
2nd part - not finished.
Walking away, Turning around another day, Waiting for time to pass by, As you can see your fun always has to fly.
What do you think?
Rachel x
|
|
|
Post by Lianne Issa on Apr 21, 2007 9:40:21 GMT
you set the scene nicely Rach hope you get it all finished so we can read it in its entirety
|
|
hez
Artists Apprentice
Posts: 99
|
Post by hez on Apr 21, 2007 10:28:35 GMT
wow i really like writn poems aswell Rachel i think you got a great capture of the poem can't wait to see the second piece finished.
|
|
|
Post by rachel on Apr 21, 2007 11:24:42 GMT
Thanks guys! glad you like it, I'm finishing the 2nd part off very soon Rach xx
|
|